Planning edit

Planning edit

 1. Shot of a black frame 

- Non diagetic sounds - One more double

Pulpy monologue

Cut

2. Tracking mid shot of vigilante "Dahlia" as he walks towards camera
- Non diagetic sounds monologue  

Cut
  
3. High angle shot of vigilante walking under a lamp post - may not be practical

Non diagetic sounds- Monologue 

Cut

4. Establishing shot of location ( extreme long shot)

Title card logo

Cut

 5. Panning Shot of picture of 1940's LA

Name credits  Music rises in volume

Cut

6 .Panning of of picture of police badge

name credits and music continues

Cut

7 .Panning shot of picture of hollywoodland sign

Cut

8 . Panning shot of polaroid photo

Cut

9 . Panning shot of images of world war 2 

Cut

10 .high angle shot of vigilante entering building

name credits and music starts to come to a close

Note process will be shortened or lengthened depending on song duration 

Fade to black

11 .tracking shot of the vigilante's feet as he walks towards door 
Non diagetic sound vigilante's internal monologue starts

Cut

12. Long shot of long hall as vigilante looks around and enters

Cut

13 .Over the shoulder shot of vigilante as the turns around and enters the door

Cut

14 . low angle shot of vigilante walking in building
Non diagetic sound- slow fade in of Gustav Mahler- Piano Quartet in A minor, however through editing we may edit the sound to make it sound as if it is played diagetically if said effect helps to drive narrative successfully
EDIT:  NEW SONG Small Blind TO BE PLAYED INSTEAD

Cut

15 .Mid shot of vigilante as he inspects the mess on the floor

Match cut

16 .Midshot of vigilante inspecting cadaver 

Non diagetic sound- internal monologue on the subject of the discover of the body

Cut

17. Close up of vigilante as he rises up to camera frame

Match cut

18 .close up of vigilante - in present day
EDIT:  NEW SONG Small Blind TO BE FADED OUT - NON DIAGETIC

Cut

19 .Close up on vigilante different angle 

Vigilante turns  around as he turns around we see a pull focus onto the objects into the background
Non diagetic sound - internal monologue on the subject on the discovery of the note
 EDIT:  NEW SOUND Concussion TO BE PLAYED FADE IN OF SOUND - NON DIAGETIC

Cut

  

20. Close up shot of photo frame 

Match cut 

21. Close up on note written in lipstick
 EDIT: SOUNDS- COMPLETE SILENCE ( NOT THE NAME OF A SONG)

Cut

22. Mid shot of vigilante inspecting the note- camera positioned to the side of vigilante
 EDIT: 
Gustav Mahler- Piano Quartet in A minor FADES IN - NON DIAGETIC

Match cut

23. Mid shot of vigilante getting up and turning towards the camera 90 degrees - present day
Non diagetic sound- Vigilante's monologue coming to an end.

Match cut

24 .Mid shot of detective in same postion holding and empty glass

Cut

25 .Long shot of detective in his office as he moves towards his window
 Non diagetic sound- detective internal monologue begins

Cut

26 .Close up of the side of detectives face as he looks at his windows

Cut

27 .High angle shot of detectives hands looking over post Morten pictures on murder victim

Cut

28. Mid shot of detective at his desk looking concerned
Non diagetic sound - detective monologue ends
Non diagetic sound- Gustav Mahler- Piano Quartet in A minor ends

Fade to black

29 .Mid shot of vigilante holding photoframe, head down window behind him
Non diagetic sound - the police sirens and policeman voice however through editing we may edit the sound to make it sound as if it is played diagetically
Vigilante raises his head

Non diagetic sound- vigilante "I'm ready when you are"

 EDIT:  NEW SOUND Concussion Reprise  TO BE PLAYED FADE IN OF SOUND - NON DIAGETIC


NOTE: ANTYTHING HIGHLIGHTED IN RED IS AN UPDATE OF THE SOUNDS
THESE SOUNDS WILL UPLOADED TO MY BLOG SOON  

NOTE: THESE SOUNDS HAVE NOW BEEN UPLOADED - http://di-londra.blogspot.co.uk/2012/11/our-soundtrack-3.html